Die Now, Die Later! Page 9 (NSFW!)
Nov17
I’m not sure if the fourth panel can be considered nudity, but it is somewhat risque, so just to be safe I’m rating this page NSFW – so folks (and me) avoid trouble.
It’s the return of Mallory!..In a flashback. You may wonder what she’s been up to since she fled the Directorate’s volcano headquarters via jetpack at the end of “Rise, Rabbit, Rise!”.
She's not the only thing here that's hysterical!
These guys have been out to sea for a little while!
Gosh, things are getting wild aboard this ship!!!
I'm especially surprised by the news about Kurno. Who woulda thunk it??? His neighbours always said he seemed like such a quiet man who kept to himself. I guess you just never can tell for sure till the rumours break out…
I always kind of suspected… he was really into antiquing… and all of those Liza Minnelli records were also a tip off. I guess Kurno gets his freak on when he's been out to sea for awhile! That mild mannered neighbor has a secret life… but as you say… no one really knows for sure!
So I guess Kurno would be a bit of a traffic hazard driving on one way streets…
They've probably revoked his license!
I would say SFW because I didn't notice the THO until I went back after I read your comment
Thanks… I've always had a tough time gauging that sort of thing. I'm just being overly cautious!
Man, if i could only clone a thigh like that. This is one of my favorite pages, Jer. It's got sexiness and lots of little innuendos plus a few hilarious jokes to accompany the excitement. Definitely a winner, I'd say.
Thanks, George! It's one of my own favorites so far… I think this page came together pretty well.
Gorgeous girl, beautiful ocean, brisk pacing, questionalble crewmates – this one's got it all, Jerry! Love the dialogue in the last few panels!
Thanks, Mark!When I was writing it, I got to thinking, "how would guys who've been out to sea for weeks react to someone like Mallory dropping out of the sky?"… then it went from there.
I hope Mallory hasn't been in the water all this time! Or maybe it hasn't been that long since she fled? I'm not sure of the time frame here.
I was attempting to imply this takes place shortly after the last story ended. ("two weeks ago" in the first panel) I guess what I didn't say, is that she was trying to land on the first boat she had seen, but since she's not very good with jet-packs, missed the mark a bit! Sometimes I forget to share a little more of the back story on some things. Sorry!
It's always hard to know how much to say and how much to edit out. As you post these pages once a week, I guess it just seems a lot longer between these incidents than it really is, story-wise.
I think it does! The once a week thing makes the editing tricky. I want to move the story along, yet getting bogged down in small stuff can make the story drag. There is the option of making it twice a week, but that might burn me out, time wise. One idea I had, was to do that when the audience numbers have risen to a certain point. We'll see what happens.
I like! 🙂
Thanks a bunch… That's always good to hear!
Man, is Mallory ever lucky she was FISHED out of the sea by a crew of gay men! Otherwise, I suspect they'd make her a sushi on a stick! o.O …thats about clean as I can make it Jer! [grin]
I appreciate the effort, Scott! 😀
I had wondered what your reaction was going to be to this page!
Phew! Finally got caught up with the story again. Things have been really hectic recently but I'm glad to have a chance to read up on my fave comics again. Great story Jerry, especially Bunny's wife! Can't wait to see this one play out.
Thanks… and welcome back James! I look forward to seeing some new Girls in Space soon!
This story is going to be a bit of a roller coaster with some unexpected… um… curves! It's been fun to write. It'll probably run a few pages longer than the last story.
OK now this page is going to have to replace my other bookmarked page that I click every time I come here to see what you are churning out. The bottom left corner panel is most scrumptious indeed.
Thanks! Glad you like it.
So when do we get to meet Kurno???
Kurno is quite camera shy! I'm not sure if he'll ever get his close up…